The Tuesday Poem: Replay
My father strides across the yard
slim, thirty, shirt-sleeves rolled purposefully up.
A milk pail clanks in his hand.
My mother stands at the door
bare-foot. Last summer's Sunday dress swings
as she turns - dark hair, long to her shoulder.
I am nine. The sunlight on the river
crackles like broken glass.
If I want to, I can sit on this bank forever.
Just a little nostalgia here. I was recently going through a box of old photographs and found many that related to my childhood on a farm in the lake district. I love the way you can re-run memory sequences like videos at the back of your head. It all exists there - nothing is lost.
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slim, thirty, shirt-sleeves rolled purposefully up.
A milk pail clanks in his hand.
My mother stands at the door
bare-foot. Last summer's Sunday dress swings
as she turns - dark hair, long to her shoulder.
I am nine. The sunlight on the river
crackles like broken glass.
If I want to, I can sit on this bank forever.
Just a little nostalgia here. I was recently going through a box of old photographs and found many that related to my childhood on a farm in the lake district. I love the way you can re-run memory sequences like videos at the back of your head. It all exists there - nothing is lost.
For more Tuesday Poems follow the link to http://www.tuesdaypoem.blogspot.com/
Lovely. I like the way the adult you in the retelling suggests the young lovely relationship between the two adults that the nine-year-old perhaps only feels? And the 's' sounds swish and swing through the poem wonderfully.
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeleteI agree memory is wonderful.
I love the simpliciy of this poem and the complementary strength of its structure ...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your support everyone. I'm really enjoying the Tuesday Poem group - such a variety of work.
ReplyDeleteA brief moment in time - a snapshot- and yet the prospect of something so enduring in that last line - lovely!
ReplyDeleteI love the line about the sunlight crackling like broken glass. Really lovely.
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